What I Call a Nightmare:

‘Twas the night before the last shadow came, A spirit I had encountered before, It held me down as if I was to blame, It had bad intentions of that I'm sure. Enabled movement, pinned upon the bed, It moved through me like an unwanted guest. Speaking in motions, but nothing was said, Nothing more to say, nothing to confess. Once it had released me from its vile trance, I shuddered to think what could it have been. A spirit of sorts that came for a glance? Although its hidden face could not be seen. It's never come again of this I'm glad, Who needs spirits like that if they're bad. (Ten Syllables per line)
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Stover Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 3:08 PM
Excellent exciting poem.
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:49 PM
Thank you very much, Christy /|\
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:28 PM
just terrific Rick
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:48 PM
Thanks, Tim /|\
Gupta Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 6:28 AM
A very good sonnet ... an weird experience nicely versified ...
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Probir! /|\
Green Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 6:03 AM
That's what I'd call an unwanted dream guest. Nicely done Rick.
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:46 PM
Thanks, Chris /|\
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January 17, 2017 at 3:39 AM
- The spiritual world is exciting ... but we have to be careful - A great poem, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:44 PM
You are so right, thanks, Anne-Lise. /|\
Herlihy Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:43 AM
A sonnet full of quality and discipline. The theme is interesting and one that I have experienced and written about. An evil spirit, a jinn, passing in the night. JH
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, JH /|\
White Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:06 AM
This is a great sonnet, and it flows beautifully. Don't play anymore, k?
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:42 PM
I don't anymore! Thanks, Duir!
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