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What Hurts the Most

It’s not the screams that hurt Nor the slamming of my door Not the stinging words we said Or the broken vase upon the floor It’s not the tears that burn Or this fire within my breast Nor this gnawing, aching feeling Devouring my chest It’s the ringing in my ears Of your silent adios The sorry that we left unsaid That really hurt the most It’s the door you do not open The vase you don’t clean up The tears you don’t wipe away That really breaks me up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/24/2017 1:36:00 PM
Hi Amber, Are you referring to the song "What Hurts The Most" by Rascal Flatts? If not, you have written a good poem. It is filled with so much emotion. It was what I was looking for . Thanks for participating in my "Your Favorite Song" contest. Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/24/2017 7:52:00 PM
Sounds to me like your better off. Just sayin. I know it hurts but think long term. Hope you are doin ok. Blessings Carl
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