What Hurts the Most

It’s not the screams that hurt
Nor the slamming of my door
Not the stinging words we said
Or the broken vase upon the floor

It’s not the tears that burn 
Or this fire within my breast
Nor this gnawing, aching feeling
Devouring my chest   

It’s the ringing in my ears
Of your silent adios
The sorry that we left unsaid
That really hurt the most 

It’s the door you do not open
The vase you don’t clean up
The tears you don’t wipe away
That really breaks me up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 24, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Hi Amber, Are you referring to the song "What Hurts The Most" by Rascal Flatts? If not, you have written a good poem. It is filled with so much emotion. It was what I was looking for . Thanks for participating in my "Your Favorite Song" contest. Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
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April 24, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Sounds to me like your better off. Just sayin. I know it hurts but think long term. Hope you are doin ok. Blessings Carl
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