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What Have You Done Anna

There's cut all over her arms and thighs With razor as a tool, she conducted a crime An intentional kill of a self incapable A suspect and a victim of a crime that made possible 'twas a clear picture before my eyes Make myself believed; maybe a humorous display As I browsed all her feedback; inferred other statements Picture's authentic; I am not imagining First time it happened on my Facebook history Mind and heart collided on an image so shaky A friend so dear to me and treated me,"Brother" Have lost all her senses, for a love that started to hate her I acted rapidly and sent her a message While tears wrapping on my face She told me of a love that's broken Will end-up a life if He's not beside Her Things didn't work out Promises didn't shape-up Two-hearts fractured as complications rise The one's still hoping while the other's ready Is this a mere option of not meeting a desire Of depression and imbalance of emotion that's inside? Anna! Anna! What have you done? I praise God for His presence He saved you from the fire If love is pure and just You have a peaceful mind And you will love yourself As you love him the best If love is a lie No one can deny It will always manifest by taking things for granted Like what you've done; imprisoned by deception Dark clouds have covered you with fear and wrong decision Please Anna, promise me now! No more blades around! You're impulsive so please turn around Say some prayers and ask God's favor Good thing you're a "Suicide Survivor". # Based on a true story Last night, I was really shocked seeing the picture of Anna(on Facebook) with bruises all over. Thought it was a joke but I'm saddened finding out that its real. Its her! She's a friend so close in my heart since school days. She attempted to end her life last night just because of a broken relationship! This is really not the end of the world! She's okay now! God is good!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/7/2013 2:09:00 AM
Ow gee I could sense that this was real cause there is so much sentimented invested in each verse..Misted my eyes and gave me goosebumps..God will be with her.
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Arden Gopela
Date: 11/7/2013 6:47:00 AM
If I could only show the pictures of Anna, Charmaine! This was too shocking and unimaginable for me. Anna treated me more than a friend but a brother. She's like a young sister whom I have to comfort as always. I cried out loud after seeing what she's done to herself. Thanks, Charmaine for reading it and for your sympathy. I appreciate that a lot. Bless you my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
Date: 11/5/2013 7:37:00 AM
A good one,I kbw Anna wil b indebted to u. My frnd wz raped bt she wz really shaken up till. She still feels it,wat a terrible world
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Arden Gopela
Date: 11/7/2013 6:37:00 AM
Sorry to hear that, Bob! Its not an easy case to forget but I hope that she was able to moved on. With proper guidance and support from her family and friends, for sure, she'll overcome that. Be safe my friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
Date: 11/2/2013 6:19:00 PM
Touching.
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Arden Gopela
Date: 11/2/2013 6:54:00 PM
Thanks my souper-friend,Sherese! All the best! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
Date: 11/2/2013 3:14:00 PM
Emotional work..It is sad that so much of this is going on in our enlightened country..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Arden Gopela
Date: 11/2/2013 5:26:00 PM
Welcome, Sarah! You're true! Hope that this option be out of the chioces in solving one's burden! There are so many things in this world that we can do by moving forward! :-)
Date: 11/1/2013 12:41:00 AM
I can see the deep caring in you for this girl. Keep it up. And I hope she stays safe and gets over her sorrow.
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:50:00 AM
She's okay now, Andrea but still hoping for the best! I treasure everyone in my life. They're like my source of energy. Its really painful to know that one them is losing that energy to move forward. Thanks, Andrea! Be safe! Love,love,love!
Date: 10/31/2013 11:31:00 PM
Suicide is a tendency of one's incapability of seeing the brigther side of oneself. So that we could share a genuine love, we have to learn the value of loving ourself as well. True love starts in realizing that our life is worthy of being taken care of like everybody else in this world. Once we know how to take care of ourself and love our own, this will widen our horizon in loving others unconditionally! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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