Bukang Liwayway Poet Free verse

What Have You Done

My mind still wants to continue,
But my body feels the tiredness,
Can’t take it anymore I told you,
What have you done to me?

My eyes look so weary,
My hands are in pain already,
How many hours of spending time with you?
FACEBOOK games……… it’s your fault!!

I’m already addicted to you ever since,
My time is wasting but I think I’m enjoying?
Well it’s time for me to sleep you know,
Till we meet again tomorrow, oh I hope so.



For Skat's Under 15 Lines Contest
8th Place Winner

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Olusegun Arowolo December 10, 2012 at 3:15 PM Wonderful write,Maria..Congrats on your well deserved win...You are right many of us are addicted to facebook and twitter...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 10, 2012 at 6:25 AM Congratulations maria love, a well deserved win xx

Poet Destroyer A December 9, 2012 at 2:52 PM Maria, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD

Skat A December 9, 2012 at 2:26 PM Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT

Harry Horsman November 20, 2012 at 4:30 PM Oh you write about today,, never go on facebookk if possible, but a very good poem...

Len Gasun October 17, 2012 at 7:29 PM Ha ha ha.. Super hilarious write Mary! I love it! I think there is no remedy for facebook addiction! (that's my own opinion), that's why I'm trying to shun it.LOL, Good luck always my dear friend! hugs:)LG

Michael J. Falotico October 14, 2012 at 1:11 PM Deep piece of your heart shared here my dear Maria. Enjoyed your words as always. Hugs n a peck on the cheek. Michael

Anne-Lise Andresen October 14, 2012 at 11:47 AM You must remember to rest a little too Mary. :) Very nice poem, enjoy it. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross October 14, 2012 at 12:20 AM ‡ You Made Me Smile With This Precious Poem, Beautiful Maria. I Love The Twist From Title's Leanings Amid Thought ? Unto The Beauty I Find Inside Your Words. Sooo Sweet Your Beautiful Voice. Easy, For Anyone To Become Addicted To. Wonderful And I Love The Ending, Or Rather One Might Say, The Beginning ? Love, Rachel ‡

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2012 at 3:03 PM there are just too many addictions today. we are all addicts to one thing or another and it's freakin FUN. hahaha. good one.

Jack Ellison October 13, 2012 at 8:48 AM You are just one of many if that makes you feel any better! LOL Life USED TO BE simple! A good one, my dear Maria... hugs, Jack xox