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What Have You Done

My mind still wants to continue, But my body feels the tiredness, Can’t take it anymore I told you, What have you done to me? My eyes look so weary, My hands are in pain already, How many hours of spending time with you? FACEBOOK games……… it’s your fault!! I’m already addicted to you ever since, My time is wasting but I think I’m enjoying? Well it’s time for me to sleep you know, Till we meet again tomorrow, oh I hope so. For Skat's Under 15 Lines Contest 8th Place Winner

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Date: 12/10/2012 3:15:00 PM
Wonderful write,Maria..Congrats on your well deserved win...You are right many of us are addicted to facebook and twitter...
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Date: 12/10/2012 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations maria love, a well deserved win xx
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:52:00 PM
Maria, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:26:00 PM
Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT
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Date: 11/20/2012 4:30:00 PM
Oh you write about today,, never go on facebookk if possible, but a very good poem...
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Date: 10/17/2012 7:29:00 PM
Ha ha ha.. Super hilarious write Mary! I love it! I think there is no remedy for facebook addiction! (that's my own opinion), that's why I'm trying to shun it.LOL, Good luck always my dear friend! hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:11:00 PM
Deep piece of your heart shared here my dear Maria. Enjoyed your words as always. Hugs n a peck on the cheek. Michael
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Date: 10/14/2012 11:47:00 AM
You must remember to rest a little too Mary. :) Very nice poem, enjoy it. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2012 12:20:00 AM
‡ You Made Me Smile With This Precious Poem, Beautiful Maria. I Love The Twist From Title's Leanings Amid Thought ? Unto The Beauty I Find Inside Your Words. Sooo Sweet Your Beautiful Voice. Easy, For Anyone To Become Addicted To. Wonderful And I Love The Ending, Or Rather One Might Say, The Beginning ? Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/13/2012 3:03:00 PM
there are just too many addictions today. we are all addicts to one thing or another and it's freakin FUN. hahaha. good one.
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Date: 10/13/2012 8:48:00 AM
You are just one of many if that makes you feel any better! LOL Life USED TO BE simple! A good one, my dear Maria... hugs, Jack xox
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