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What Happens To the Unborn

Where go the unborn?
no breathe shall draw in this world
no rocking or lullabies
no breast shall comfort
no earthly mother to hold
reborn miraculously

From pages the book
divine narratives bestowed
transformed to cherub angels
deliver blessings
illuminate consciousness
creative inspiration

Entered in the Fives and Sevens Poetry Contest
Placed 4th
Sponsor: Joseph May
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Dated 17.07.2019

Copyright © Georgia Kereopa | Year Posted 2019

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Diane Christian Date: 4/13/2024 12:53:00 PM A heartfelt featured poem, Miscarriage and loosing babies runs in my family, I was blessed with 4 though. My mam lost one that died after birth and lost one after me, 3 of my sister's lost babies but had some that survived my niece lost her first and my 2 older son's partners lost their first one. The Lord would definitely take them to heaven. all little cherub angels Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 7/22/2019 9:00:00 PM touching thought you investigate here, Georgia. Congratulations on a fine piece and your win for it. I believe that they are safe in the Lord's hands and that He has a place and purpose for them in heaven. Nothing escapes God's omniscience; nothing overrides His omnipotence; nothing beats his omnipresence. Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/22/2019 9:05:00 PM RAP, thank you for your insights which I share as well

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/22/2019 9:28:00 AM A poignant poem! Congrats on win. Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/22/2019 9:49:00 AM Thank you Jeanne.

Heidi Sands Date: 7/22/2019 6:22:00 AM Congratulations for your win Georgia. A moving poem! Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/22/2019 6:26:00 AM Thanks Heidi for reading and feedback Heidi. Hope a little angel blesses me tonight.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/22/2019 5:31:00 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful win, Georgia:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/22/2019 5:40:00 AM thanks you sunshine, fellow bee lover, poet. I am enjoying your haiku

Joseph May Date: 7/21/2019 5:59:00 PM A sad sentiment Georgia.. ..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/21/2019 9:22:00 PM Thank you Joseph

Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/20/2019 11:50:00 AM They say, the unborn go nowhere. They become what we call ghosts. Over time, they dissolve in space. P.S.: It's a very impressive poem. Good luck in contest, Georgia) Login to Reply Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/21/2019 2:40:00 PM Oh, I see you chose #2. Hm, dissolving in space... Congrats on win, Georgia. Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/20/2019 7:40:00 PM thank you Kurt

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/17/2019 12:44:00 AM This s a winner! Panagiota Login to Reply Georgia Kereopa Date: 7/20/2019 7:35:00 PM thanks for your encouragement.