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I resided there once
I returned to find it derelict 
Looks like a horror scene
Spiders spun webs
Doors locks blown off
Leaves placed as if arranged evilly
When I was there
I remember it serene 
Well cared for secure place to live
Warm and tranquil
What have you done to the place

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Date: 6/19/2025 4:01:00 PM
Wow! I went to my old neighborhood after years…the road was all broken up…and where was the lake. I asked someone..came to find out he owned it and after years decided to fence it in. Like “Back to the Future”
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 6/20/2025 1:53:00 AM
Yeah, same wondered what happened. Thanks for coming by Kim.

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