What happened to the place

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I resided there once I returned to find it derelict Looks like a horror scene Spiders spun webs Doors locks blown off Leaves placed as if arranged evilly When I was there I remember it serene Well cared for secure place to live Warm and tranquil What have you done to the place

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/19/2025 4:01:00 PM

Wow! I went to my old neighborhood after years…the road was all broken up…and where was the lake. I asked someone..came to find out he owned it and after years decided to fence it in. Like “Back to the Future”

Tahira Parveen
Date: 6/20/2025 1:53:00 AM

Yeah, same wondered what happened. Thanks for coming by Kim.