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What God Intended

WHAT GOD INTENDED i grabbed the soupy ceramic without a doubt basic white, and i’m blank i choose a skybound color a lovely tone of blue and paint the inside blue and the outside too several layers that’s what they told me to do i grab some silk a pretty curlicue and blot with bliss just below the sip line with a lovely teal this time gaining speed, a rose with specks they say it’ll drip when they finish it off so i say tell me the truth does this look awful and they say “yes” but quantified, that after the soup mug feels the burn and cools down it will be what God intended B E A U T I F U L 10/28/2017

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Date: 11/9/2017 6:45:00 AM
This is one sweet, affectionate poem, Kim. I love your potter's house poetic creations. When your pen finishes a poem's last line, what it was intended to be ... forever shines! Beautiful sentiments. Sunburst poetry. Love and smiles always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2017 7:44:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Freddie!
Date: 10/28/2017 10:04:00 PM
Well done Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2017 6:04:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 10/28/2017 6:08:00 PM
Wao! You wrote this today!!! Amazing Kim. I am really shocked to have seen your world of poerty!!! You are more passionate. God really INTENDED you to WRITE. I love this poem. Sometimes we find ourselves in some odd situations but later, we realize it all works for our Good.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2017 6:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Atsu!
Date: 10/28/2017 5:55:00 PM
For sure--it will be beautiful! Love the confidence in these words!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2017 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Vijay!

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