What Else
'Hole in Heaven' composed by the certain dramatist of India
Depicting the Heaven captured by earthly power-mania
Yahweh’s three-leg-throne getting easily bombarded
And the whole heavenly communion getting annihilated
'Bye, Bye, Butterfly' I titled a poetic piece once, my friend
Poems are endless and real poems find no perfect end
I am talking to you today about selecting a fitting tile
It's not so easy when you write a literary work vital
When on earth I find my works getting lesser or no viewers ever
Immediately a pain starts pricking me just like an office pin, severe
'The Respectable Donkey' -well-versed; rhymes jingling, yet, why
This work gets as though dust-bins standing neglected eternally by
What else you want? indeed, important is the way you say
Take time to edit and get masters’ views on what you convey
All the same, find a proper title like 'Taurus in its Temperature'
That attracts anyone who comes across your work makes sure
‘My Last Cup of Whisky’ I titled one of my counseling works
‘Who drinks whisky in a cup?’ a genuine critique questions
Cup or glass or vessel or plate or kettle or pot I simply tell you
If you drink whisky, constantly, you need to take care, Best wishes!
04/28/2021
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