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'Hole in Heaven' composed by the certain dramatist of India Depicting the Heaven captured by earthly power-mania Yahweh’s three-leg-throne getting easily bombarded And the whole heavenly communion getting annihilated 'Bye, Bye, Butterfly' I titled a poetic piece once, my friend Poems are endless and real poems find no perfect end I am talking to you today about selecting a fitting tile It's not so easy when you write a literary work vital When on earth I find my works getting lesser or no viewers ever Immediately a pain starts pricking me just like an office pin, severe 'The Respectable Donkey' -well-versed; rhymes jingling, yet, why This work gets as though dust-bins standing neglected eternally by What else you want? indeed, important is the way you say Take time to edit and get masters’ views on what you convey All the same, find a proper title like 'Taurus in its Temperature' That attracts anyone who comes across your work makes sure ‘My Last Cup of Whisky’ I titled one of my counseling works ‘Who drinks whisky in a cup?’ a genuine critique questions Cup or glass or vessel or plate or kettle or pot I simply tell you If you drink whisky, constantly, you need to take care, Best wishes! 04/28/2021 What's In A Title In 14-20 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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