What Easter Means To Me: the Legionnaire's Account

All dressed in purple like a king,
The man was spat at, flogged and mocked,
And forced to carry his own cross,
As witnessed by the crowds that flocked.

I listened to their hateful words,
And wondered what his crime had been,
I felt compassion for the man:
The stoutest victim I had seen.

I offered wine, which he refused -
But gratitude was on his face -
I muttered, ‘Sorry I’ll be quick,’
And sadly nailed him into place.

His cross was raised at nine o’clock.
He suffered much; his mother cried.
I prayed to my gods for the end.
At three o’clock the brave man died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/1/2011 10:57:00 PM
Jack what a splendid presentation. To show it thru the eyes of a roman. I bet they were more worthy at that time than those who screamed for him to be crucified. this was a classy poem and I hopt it does well. As you see, I got hold of hubbie's laptop to use in the motel. YEAAA. Maybe tomorrow I better give it a rest though. Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:38:00 AM
Seeing Easter through the eyes of one who nailed Christ to the cross is a brilliant perspective, Jack. A deeply moving poem that is sure to be a winner. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 4:20:00 AM
Great tribute, Jack! Well written! Helga Deen's parents and brother were all gassed. Different to Anne Frank who died in a concentration camp from typhoid fever but her Father survived. Great that you had the chance to visit Germany. I have been to Cochem and the Mosella valley on holidays in 2008. Would be quite difficult from here now being too far away. Thanks for your kind comments!...Gert:)
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:20:00 PM
Hi Jack.. your title for the contest by Gwendolen has to reflect the contest title What Easter Means to Me ... u can put The Legionaire's Account in the body of your entry above your words.. this is how I just posted my entry if u want to have a look see..luv..
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Date: 3/15/2011 4:15:00 PM
Very touching Jack.. makes the reader feel the sorrow the one who nailed HIM to the cross felt as u set this scene.. good luck in Gwen's contest ... awesome depiction luv..
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Date: 3/15/2011 3:30:00 PM
Nice tribute you have paid to the brave man, Nice character sketch, jack
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