Home » Poems » Cynthia Alvez » What Dreams Reveal

What Dreams Reveal

'Twas in a dream it came to me 'Twas only myself, I could set free. Good-bye sweet love, or so I thought it was, Good-bye! Good-bye! 'Twas not me you loved. It was only the girl, in truth,I never wanted to be, Now you and I can both be free! Good-bye! Cynthia

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2012 5:24:00 AM

Nicely written Cynthia.....Never say goodbye...it`s so sad..... - Well done, like it. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/19/2012 10:16:00 AM

Anne, Thank you...in this case good-bye was a matter of regaining power over one's life...lol Cynthia

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 4:21:00 AM

Cynthia dreams become reality...David

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/19/2012 10:18:00 AM

David, I have a poem posted here which speaks of dreams and reality...fact is, that happens to be the title. Hope you will read it. Thank you for the comment. Cynthia