What Doesn'T Kill Us-Regrets

Regrets I have a few today,
time flew by as the month of May,
ambitious thoughts I put off yesterday...

Looking back at my plowed fields I stumbled,
a reaping what I sowed kind of fumble,
out busy staying alive like Travolta,
menial day jobs and doing the hustle,

Barely making it in the work jungle,
still sorting out life's jigsaw puzzle,
shoulda, woulda, coulda my motto,
writing helping me out of my dark tunnel.




2-26-17
75 words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bennett Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:36 PM
I also LOVE the staying alive, Travolta reference--adorable !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
Hoffman Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Jeanie and thanks for kind comment~Che :)
Hauser  Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 7:17 AM
Couldn't agree more!
Hoffman Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thanks for kind comment and stop by Mike!~Che :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Cool poem, Cheryl. I love the "Staying Alive" part. You have a braveheart, though it do helps to release some steam through writing. Love this 7up poem. Love always, dear.
Hoffman Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment Freddie; now I'm craving a 7up, lol! Writing definitely helps release some steam! P & L~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Wonderful, Cheryl, especially the part about Travolta! Can hear the music now as he walks down the city streets!
Hoffman Avatar
February 27, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Me too since I grew up in that "era!" Sometimes that song gets stuck in my mind for some reason…thanks for kind comment Kim!~Che :)
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Certainly all can relate to this, Mrs Cheryl. Good luck! The captcha was ARK:)
Turner Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 12:25 PM
It's the old abbreviation of Arkansas, that is where I live:)
Hoffman Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Thanks so much for kind comment Daniel! Have no idea what you mean by ARK though; will have to look that one up!~Che :)
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February 26, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Like ;) 7, I like so much!
Hoffman Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Thanks so much for kind comment and high rating Mo!~Che :)
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