Barbara Gorelick Poet Haiku

What Does the Fox Say

quietly sitting
dark eyes watching the world pass
singing his own song

red through the forest
tail his rudder as he goes
if a fox can smile

a hare passes by
lifting his nose he goes on
maybe tomorrow


Woo-oo-oo-ooo

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Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2014 at 10:57 PM YEAH.... NICE...PD

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2014 at 11:53 AM Creative Haiku..Great thought went into this one..Congrats…Sara

Aiyah Torres March 31, 2014 at 8:16 AM Congratulations on your fine win, Barbara!! ..woo-oo-oo-!!! :')0

Paul Callus March 30, 2014 at 5:57 AM Congrats barbara; love all your foxy haiku :) // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta March 30, 2014 at 5:43 AM Thanks for a good humor to enjoy and congrats on the win, barbara

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2014 at 7:44 PM I really like how you did yours. One of my favorites in the contest. Congrats, Barbara.

Skat A March 29, 2014 at 6:58 PM Nice win...SK

Barbara Gorelick March 16, 2014 at 10:03 AM Thanks my dear..I thought the video was just wonderful. Took me forever to go see it. BG Barbara Gorelick March 16, 2014 at 10:04 AM oops...

Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2014 at 9:13 AM - Very good one, Barbara!!!! - Luck in contest. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2014 at 10:07 AM - ....... the boys from NORWAY :))) Barbara Gorelick March 16, 2014 at 10:05 AM Thanks my dear..I thought the video was just wonderful. Took me forever to go see it. BG Reply

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2014 at 11:06 PM :)... Good luck.. PD

Robert Pettit March 15, 2014 at 10:18 PM You're making the judging in the contest tougher with this entry. Good triple dose of haiku.