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What Does the Fox Say

Vulpine barhopper
bays pick up line to new moon
Mama-dum-day-do

Feline target wails
unsheathing sharp claws to show
Hatee-hatee- ho

Grizzly bouncer comes
rescues feline in distress
Pa-pa-pa-pa-pow!

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Poet Destroyer A

March 31, 2014 at 10:54 PM

DAVE, I WUV the haiku. This contest was exciting and fun to read. What the fox say? Wa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pow! CONGRATULATIONS! Always & Forever *LINDA*

D.W. Rodgers

April 1, 2014 at 7:50 AM

Thanks Linda, and more thanks for the opportunity to combine haiku and onomatopoeia

Sara Kendrick

March 31, 2014 at 11:36 AM

Creative Haiku..Great thought went into this one..Congrats…Sara

D.W. Rodgers

March 31, 2014 at 11:58 AM

Thanks Sara

D.W. Rodgers

March 31, 2014 at 10:44 AM

Extra stanzas added after contest closed.

Barbara Gorelick

March 30, 2014 at 11:23 AM

Cute one. like it! Congrats to you! BG

D.W. Rodgers

March 30, 2014 at 6:02 PM

Thanks Barbara

Paul Callus

March 30, 2014 at 5:46 AM

Yes, like this one :) congrats on win. // paul

D.W. Rodgers

March 30, 2014 at 6:03 PM

Thanks Paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 30, 2014 at 5:34 AM

Thanks for a good humor to enjoy and congrats on the win, roger

D.W. Rodgers

March 30, 2014 at 6:04 PM

Thanks Dr, M

Andrea Dietrich

March 29, 2014 at 7:35 PM

Cool line on "new moon" Congrats on your win.

D.W. Rodgers

March 29, 2014 at 10:30 PM

Andrea, thanks

Skat A

March 29, 2014 at 6:52 PM

Love it Roger..... Congratulations! SKAT

D.W. Rodgers

March 29, 2014 at 10:32 PM

Thank you and thanks too for your contest.

Richard Lamoureux

March 12, 2014 at 9:33 AM

Clever piece.

D.W. Rodgers

March 12, 2014 at 11:31 AM

Thanks again. I wasn't sure what a Haiku burst entailed but later added these following "verses" His feline target her claws unsheathed meows Hatee-hatee- ho! Bovine barbouncer attends to testy issue budabud-dum-bam only to find one was sufficient