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What Does the Fox Say

Vulpine barhopper bays pick up line to new moon Mama-dum-day-do Feline target wails unsheathing sharp claws to show Hatee-hatee- ho Grizzly bouncer comes rescues feline in distress Pa-pa-pa-pa-pow!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:54:00 PM

DAVE, I WUV the haiku. This contest was exciting and fun to read. What the fox say? Wa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pow! CONGRATULATIONS! Always & Forever *LINDA*

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/1/2014 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Linda, and more thanks for the opportunity to combine haiku and onomatopoeia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2014 11:36:00 AM

Creative Haiku..Great thought went into this one..Congrats…Sara

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/31/2014 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Sara

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 3/31/2014 10:44:00 AM

Extra stanzas added after contest closed.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/30/2014 11:23:00 AM

Cute one. like it! Congrats to you! BG

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/30/2014 6:02:00 PM

Thanks Barbara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2014 5:46:00 AM

Yes, like this one :) congrats on win. // paul

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/30/2014 6:03:00 PM

Thanks Paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 AM

Thanks for a good humor to enjoy and congrats on the win, roger

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/30/2014 6:04:00 PM

Thanks Dr, M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2014 7:35:00 PM

Cool line on "new moon" Congrats on your win.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/29/2014 10:30:00 PM

Andrea, thanks

Skat A

Date: 3/29/2014 6:52:00 PM

Love it Roger..... Congratulations! SKAT

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/29/2014 10:32:00 PM

Thank you and thanks too for your contest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2014 9:33:00 AM

Clever piece.

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/12/2014 11:31:00 AM

Thanks again. I wasn't sure what a Haiku burst entailed but later added these following "verses" His feline target her claws unsheathed meows Hatee-hatee- ho! Bovine barbouncer attends to testy issue budabud-dum-bam only to find one was sufficient

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2014 12:49:00 PM

- Great haiku, Roger :) - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/2/2014 2:58:00 PM

Anne Lise, many thanks - where else does one get the opportunity to combine haiku and onomatopoeia?

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/1/2014 10:25:00 PM

Looks like a good entry. Good luck with it!

D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/2/2014 8:12:00 AM

Thanks and good luck with your entry too