What Does Maisie Smile About

What Does Maisie Smile About?

(or A Tale of 3 Ladders)

“I wonder what Maisie smiles about, 
when she stares out of her window?”asks Jane, 
the new carer at St. Mary's, is curious,
about the aged figure watching the rain

Maisie is deep in her thoughts today,
“Maisie, Maisie”, her Grandpa cries,
“these ripe apples won't pick themselves you know!”
and up the long ladder her young legs rise                                 (1st ladder)

Autumn, in the golden orchard of yesteryear,
the warm setting sun, the birds and the bees,
the grown ups, all so merry with chatter,
Maisie and friends, all playing at ease

Such happy days of Autumn sun,
of foraged blackberries and apple cake,
of sweet plum puddings and then,
apple with cheddar  in the same bake

The adults, merry now, and all a dance,
the tree house ladder calls the young throng,                           (2nd ladder)
the boys scatter 'jacks', the girls make 'cat's cradle',
then all descend to skip in time to song

This is what I reminisce about,
and my time is far from past, you see,
I hear them, calling me, up that final ladder, 
“Maisie, your young legs will soon be free!”

Not long now, as I grow so very tired,
I will shed my 'costume' of aged joints so sore,
and return again to the young girl that I really am,
and sprint up those ladder rungs once more!                            (3rd ladder)


Mrs Cheryl Darby 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/12/2015 6:45:00 PM
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Cheryl Darby
Date: 7/13/2015 5:24:00 AM
Yes, I will certainly visit your site, thank you. Cheryl
Date: 7/12/2015 12:41:00 PM
This is an impressive piece. I was drawn up each ladder with you. I liked the nostalgic feel of the piece. 7 rating all the way.
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Cheryl Darby
Date: 7/12/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Richard. I am a member of an amateur poetry group that meets once a month, they set a theme for each meeting and that particular month it was a ladder! Just thought I should explain why I had to include the ladders! Cheryl
Date: 6/19/2015 3:05:00 PM
I'm also smiling because this heartwarming poem brought me back to my favorite season...autumn. Nicely written, Cheryl! Welcome to Poetry Soup! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Cheryl Darby
Date: 6/20/2015 4:18:00 AM
Thank you for taking the trouble to comment, I love Autumn too! Cheryl
Date: 6/15/2015 1:51:00 AM
that is a good poem...SK
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Cheryl Darby
Date: 6/15/2015 2:58:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments! Cheryl
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