Samantha Mcdougal Poet Blank verse

What Does God Have To Do With It?

Drunken Smutty Teenager.
Burning Suicidal Angst.
Red Breast Ripped Open
In The Cold January Heat.
When Love Is Harsh.
When Love Quakes
Within This Presence.
When It's Burs Are Only Nibbling. 
When It's Eating Out Our Ancestors
And Crumbling With The Asphalt.
Breaking And Entering.
Lapping Up The Crimson 
Of A Bleeding Heart.

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John Loving Iii October 20, 2012 at 3:09 PM Oh this is what kind of poet she is? The serious type. She hasn't been here for a while. That serious poetry stuff can give you writers block bad. Advice compare your stuff to emily dickens and maybe you get some insight. Or better yet read the comments on any of my poetry and you will find that you are in the.009%

Debbie Guzzi May 4, 2009 at 12:51 PM Good contest entry for Something Wicked This Way Comes...check to see if "bur or burr" is what you want? Light & Love