Pat Adams Poet Rhyme

What Do You See

While squatting down the boy had such
Innocent attraction on display
A handful of acorns loved so much
Each unique, to him in some way!

As an adult what do you see?
Look through a child's eyes when you do
You'll see God's creations are unique
Even when it's just a nut like you!

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Eileen Manassian January 29, 2018 at 9:52 PM :) :) :) I surely didn't expect that ending....very unique write. How come I'm just now getting acquainted with your writing? I'm glad you visited my poetry. Blessings. Pat Adams April 20, 2018 at 3:31 PM I guess I've been flying under the radar!.....Thanks for commenting Eileen!.............Pat

Line Gauthier January 27, 2018 at 9:46 AM A joy to read. You are so nutty, Pat... just another of God's quirky lovable creatures! Pat Adams April 20, 2018 at 3:30 PM You are too kind (I think!?)....80)..Thanks Line!....Pat

Cheryl Hoffman January 25, 2018 at 7:40 PM Love the humor in this nutty poem Pat! Thanks for the smile~Che :) Pat Adams April 20, 2018 at 3:29 PM Ha! Nutty poem! Good one! Thank you for commenting Cheryl!

Ilene Bauer January 25, 2018 at 4:29 PM ha! i love the way you sneak some humor into your poems, pat! Pat Adams April 20, 2018 at 3:28 PM I can be sneaky that way at times!! Have a great day!