Darian Brown Poet Rhyme

What Do You See

What do you see?
The world is in my eyes
Tears are in my cries
The truth is in my lies
Success in all tries
The limit in my skies
Even salt is on my fries
So when you look in my eyes
Sincere without lies
To answer the question when arise
What do you see?

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 11, 2012 at 5:39 AM Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Darian. Love, Carol Darian Brown January 13, 2012 at 6:21 AM thanks

Bob Quigley January 10, 2012 at 10:31 PM Congratulations on your win Darian Darian Brown January 13, 2012 at 6:21 AM thanks

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2012 at 9:56 PM THis was a fun read. I found that funny, even salt is on my fries! Congrats on your win. Darian Brown January 13, 2012 at 6:21 AM thanks

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 10, 2012 at 7:02 PM CONGRATS DARIAN ON A DYNAMIC THIRD PLACE WIN.. Darian Brown January 13, 2012 at 6:21 AM thanks

Joyce Johnson January 10, 2012 at 6:32 PM A one rhyme poem. Very clever. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Darian Brown January 13, 2012 at 6:21 AM thanks

Laura Breidenthal December 26, 2011 at 5:58 PM Another lovely poem to have read today. Keep up the great work!! Always, Laura Darian Brown January 13, 2012 at 6:22 AM thanks