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What Do You Hope To See

He stood there like a phantom, watching o’er a realm of mist. I held my breath behind him, as truth and tale kissed. I didn’t dare reach out to him; how could I lend a hand? His thoughts were trained on mystery, that swirled through the land. I waited there behind him, upon that tower of rock. Until I climbed back to the base, and broke the haunting lock. I closed my fingers round the frame, and moved to leave him there— still standing in strict silence, maintaining his soft stare. And as I stepped out of the fog, my words at last fell free. I asked the man so lonely: “What do you hope to see?” 7 May 2016 Wanderer above the Sea of Fog, Caspar David Friedrich for “Within a Gilded Frame”, sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 5/15/2016 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on the 1st place!
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/15/2016 9:25:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wonderfully written James, Congratulations....
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:25:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2016 10:13:00 AM
A beautiful write without need of the painting, yet, a wonderful interpretation of the painting as well. Very nice flow and nice rhymes. Great write James.
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:24:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:25:00 AM
James, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/15/2016 9:24:00 PM
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:52:00 PM
Nicely penned James.
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J. I. Thomas F.
Date: 5/9/2016 4:36:00 PM
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Date: 5/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
Nice one! GL with the contest. -G
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Date: 5/7/2016 1:07:00 PM
Thanks!

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