What Do You Hope To See

He stood there like a phantom,
watching o’er a realm of mist.
I held my breath behind him,
as truth and tale kissed.

I didn’t dare reach out to him;
how could I lend a hand?
His thoughts were trained on mystery,
that swirled through the land. 

I waited there behind him,
upon that tower of rock.
Until I climbed back to the base,
and broke the haunting lock.

I closed my fingers round the frame, 
and moved to leave him there—
still standing in strict silence,
maintaining his soft stare.

And as I stepped out of the fog,
my words at last fell free.
I asked the man so lonely:
“What do you hope to see?”


7 May 2016
Wanderer above the Sea of Fog, Caspar David Friedrich 
for “Within a Gilded Frame”, sponsored by Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/15/2016 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on the 1st place!
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:25:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2016 11:54:00 AM
Wonderfully written James, Congratulations....
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Date: 5/13/2016 10:13:00 AM
A beautiful write without need of the painting, yet, a wonderful interpretation of the painting as well. Very nice flow and nice rhymes. Great write James.
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Date: 5/15/2016 9:24:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:25:00 AM
James, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA
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Date: 5/9/2016 1:52:00 PM
Nicely penned James.
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Date: 5/9/2016 4:36:00 PM
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Date: 5/7/2016 10:47:00 AM
Nice one! GL with the contest. -G
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