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What Do I Say - Even the Angels Weep


What Do I Say...Even The Angels Weep


What do I say to her,
my sweet daughter,
married, mother of two;
her life turned upside down
in a nightmare of change,
such sadness and unknowns.
I don't know what to say...
even the angels weep.

What do I say to her
and to our granddaughters,
sixteen and twenty-one:
there are things he cannot do;
he is not the husband and father
that you knew.
There is no hope...
even the angels weep.

What do I say to them
while my heart is breaking
also for him,
dear son-in-law,
no longer able to work
the wonderful job he had 
for the past twenty-six years...
even the angels weep.

What so I say to my daughter;
early onset Parkinson's
has taken over her love.
Nothing is the same;
she is losing him,
mind and body;
he is not the same...
even the angels weep.

What do I say to them,
my dear granddaughters.
Will he walk you down the isle
when that time comes?
Will he see his first grandchild?
He just turned fifty.
How many years before...
even the angels weep.

What do I say to them...
I have no words for my daughter
and her sweet girls.
I have no words for myself.
Life is a wheel of fortune...
Some wins...some losses.
There are no words...
even the angels weep.


Sandra M. Haight

~9th Place~
Contest: Best Sad Poem Ever II
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 09/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Warrior Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Congrats!!! Sandra...such a compelling verse...god bless...^WW^
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Thank you so much, WW. Sandra
Nusker Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Very well written, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Thank you, Afzal! Sandra
Arnone Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 7:58 PM
Touching, heartfelt and well written, as always -- but, I would just say the truth! Congrats, Sandra. :-)
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:35 PM
Thank you, Tom...we all want to shield our kids from devastating truths...hence, "what do I say?" Thanks for positive comment and congrats! Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 3:16 PM
This is utterly sad and heartbreaking Sandra!Congrats on your win!
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 11:43 AM
sweet Sandra, how sad is it when we say to ourselves, "even the angels weep", that statement just hurts in and of itself. Very sadly yet beautifully written...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thank you, dear Laura, for another great contest and a chance to showcase older poems. I appreciate my nice placement! ;) Hugs, Sandra
Kriticos Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 1:14 PM
I love this poem. So well written and it actually addresses a question I have found myself asking and have heard being asked before. "If there are angels and a God and they are so good hearted, where are they now during this war and disease and corruption and dying. your answer struck me as plausible, that "the Angels are weaping too"!
Haight Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Kyle, for reading my poem and for your positive and uplifting comments. I am very pleased that it helped with your feelings. I believe that angels are guardians and liaisons between us and God, and can be sad too when we are unhappy. Again, thank you for stopping by. Sandra
Vincent Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 11:40 AM
I honestly pray you do well in the contest, it may be a much valuable high amidst all the lows
Vincent Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 11:36 AM
How painful a read this one is I don't know whether it follows the rules or not......My first reading I even forgot the name of the contest: The only thing I could remember were the pictures of despair and surrender so clearly painted by your words.
Haight Avatar
May 29, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Messoh, thank you so much for stopping by to read my poem. Yes, it is a sad happening in our family. I appreciate your heartfelt comments. Actually, the contest ended early May, and my poem did not make the winners' list, but I am pleased that others have offered nice comments. Sandra
Dutta Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:44 AM
So shocking to see the angels to weep. Children Grand children are angels to us. Love. Sandra.
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