What Defines You

I think; therefore, I am
  No, you breathe --
  therefore, you are 

I think; therefore, I am
  No, you eat --
  therefore, you are

I think; therefore, I am
  No, you drink water --
  therefore, you are  

I think; therefore, I am
  No, you have mass
  and occupy space --
  therefore, you are

I think; therefore, I am
  No, you text and tweet --
  therefore, you are

I think; therefore, -- Y-A-W-N
  No, you sleep --
  therefore, you are
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Laurie Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 7:06 PM
G'day Gershon … whatever we do that's right, it appears to come with thought. Whenever something goes wrong; we weren't thinking - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
Ellis Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:08 PM
Simply beautiful and beautifully simple. Much can be achieved with purpose Poem doesn't read like he slept with a Thesaurus. Bravo
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:34 PM
'Thesaurus' had too many syllables for him, although heard he made some moves on diplodocus. Thanks, Poet. Appreciate your encouragement! Courage and Joy, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Y-A-W-N I am going to sleep soon, therefore I am too. LOL
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:32 PM
I always knew that 'you are,' Line! LOL. Best always, Gershon
Foster Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 8:25 PM
lol you are too funny... :) hugs. Ann
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Too funny for my own good, sometimes, as my family reminds me so often... Oh yeah, they substitute CORNY for funny, don't they?! LOL. Thanks, Ann. ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 8:05 PM
Oh, the workings of your mind!
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:30 PM
What, me work?! Maynard G. Krebs / Bob Denver
Faulkner Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 7:59 PM
I don't overthink - therefore I am sane!
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 10:30 PM
Let me think that one over for a while… Smiles, Gershon
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