What Child Is This Premiere Contest Winner

What child is this?
Stepping down to a semi dark tavern 
with an empty bottle at the age of five 
to be filled with ruby red wine,
fascinated by farmers sitting
at a rustic table, darkened by time
laughing and eating through 
thick mustaches, perfect teeth,
smelling of garlic and wine?
Sitting in a bus and being startled
by a woman gone berserk 
on hearing little traveler was alone   
on her way to visit grandma
on the Trevico mountain. 
Little did she know smarty was a regular!
And the locked farm gate, little spider climbed 
and opened from inside?
What child is this? A much loved child
by a lioness mother and a father who, 
when teacher said she couldn’t handle English, 
he answered: “She can do anything!”


First Place: L Milton Hankins-Story From Your Childhood-12/10/20
Second Place: Craig Cornish-What child Is This-10/18/17

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Date: 12/12/2020 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. Have you thought about making a book out of this????? Enjoy your day with blessings.....................
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Date: 12/11/2020 8:47:00 PM
What a story memoir Frances. So many elements of childhood, family members and experiences condensed and highlighted! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 12/11/2020 11:27:00 AM
Powerful memory. Congrats on your gold win, Frances ~
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Date: 12/11/2020 5:48:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 12/11/2020 3:48:00 AM
Fantastic write, Frances. Congratulations on your top win in the contest.. well-deserved :) Charlie
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Date: 12/10/2020 8:57:00 PM
An amazing poem....Congrats on a top win Frances :)
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Date: 12/10/2020 8:43:00 PM
Frances, I want you to know that my contest received some superb entries, but your poem rose to the top. I congratulate you on a fine piece of work, and let you know I was delighted that you are THE # 1 winner!
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Date: 12/11/2020 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Milton for GOLD Christmas present. Wishing you same happiness.
Date: 12/10/2020 8:42:00 PM
Frances, I want you to know that my contest received some superb entries, but your poem rose to the top. I congratulate you on a fine piece of work, and let you know I was delighted that you are THE NUMBER 1 winner!
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Date: 10/25/2017 5:25:00 PM
Beautiful and thoughtful write, Frances - congrats! :-)
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Date: 10/25/2017 5:06:00 AM
Such divergent memories can only be learned in childhood. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on your placement with the vivid wording used.
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Date: 10/24/2017 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Frances, on your placement. Amazing how different childhoods can be. Beautiful write!
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Date: 10/18/2017 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful write,Frances, congratulations on your new!
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Date: 10/18/2017 3:14:00 PM
Hi Frances, Congratulations on your placement in the contest in the "What Child Is This" contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/18/2017 12:19:00 PM
So well deserved placement with your beautiful poem, congratulations :)
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Date: 10/12/2017 5:03:00 PM
Love the depiction of childhood memories--a charming tale of love in the family--best for a win, Frances!
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