Premiere Contest WinnerWhat Child Is This

What child is this?
Stepping down to a semi dark tavern 
with an empty bottle at the age of five 
to be filled with ruby red wine,
fascinated by farmers sitting
at a rustic table, darkened by time
laughing and eating through 
thick mustaches, perfect teeth,
smelling of garlic and wine?
Sitting in a bus and being startled
by a woman gone berserk 
on hearing little traveler was alone   
on her way to visit grandma
on the Trevico mountain. 
Little did she know smarty was a regular!
And the locked farm gate, little spider climbed 
and opened from inside?
What child is this? A much loved child
by a lioness mother and a father who, 
when teacher said she couldn’t handle English, 
he answered: “She can do anything!”


First Place: L Milton Hankins-Story From Your Childhood-12/10/20
Second Place: Craig Cornish-What child Is This-10/18/17
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" story/write. Have you thought about making a book out of this????? Enjoy your day with blessings.....................
Kauffman Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 8:47 PM
What a story memoir Frances. So many elements of childhood, family members and experiences condensed and highlighted! Congratulations on your first place win!
Gauthier Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Powerful memory. Congrats on your gold win, Frances ~
Agustin Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 5:48 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Messina Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Fantastic write, Frances. Congratulations on your top win in the contest.. well-deserved :) Charlie
Mitra Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 8:57 PM
An amazing poem....Congrats on a top win Frances :)
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December 10, 2020 at 8:43 PM
Frances, I want you to know that my contest received some superb entries, but your poem rose to the top. I congratulate you on a fine piece of work, and let you know I was delighted that you are THE # 1 winner!
Schiavina Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Thank you Milton for GOLD Christmas present. Wishing you same happiness.
Hankins Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 8:42 PM
Frances, I want you to know that my contest received some superb entries, but your poem rose to the top. I congratulate you on a fine piece of work, and let you know I was delighted that you are THE NUMBER 1 winner!
Barden Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful and thoughtful write, Frances - congrats! :-)
Cwiak Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:06 AM
Such divergent memories can only be learned in childhood. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on your placement with the vivid wording used.
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October 24, 2017 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations, Frances, on your placement. Amazing how different childhoods can be. Beautiful write!
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Beautiful write,Frances, congratulations on your new!
Y. Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Hi Frances, Congratulations on your placement in the contest in the "What Child Is This" contest:-) Alexis
White Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 12:19 PM
So well deserved placement with your beautiful poem, congratulations :)
Pandit Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Love the depiction of childhood memories--a charming tale of love in the family--best for a win, Frances!
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