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What Befalls At a Brook

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What Befalls At A Brook Delight I, midst a babbling brook, Touching its banks, hugging its rocks, The child in me that I mistook, Stills on, hearing to water talks. Ere am awash toward concord, Delight I, midst a babbling brook, Be at its whim a righteous chord, Smoothly drifting a dream unhook. Sail on my words versed in a book, Venturous soul towards each turn, Delight I, midst a babbling brook, Parts anew my memory yearn. Dabble against the wayward flow, Pictured on banks and rocks a look, A lake arise brook mouths must go, Delight I, midst a babbling brook. 2020 March 18 *3rd Place* STRAND CHOICE K,any form,any theme ~~Brian Strand

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Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/6/2020 11:30:00 AM
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A babbling poem to win heart. CONGRATS.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 4/6/2020 2:33:00 PM
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Much thanks, Anisha, -- Aloha!~@wk
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Harry Horsman
Date: 3/20/2020 1:17:00 AM
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Poetry like the brook that flows and so rhythmic, love it. William.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 3/20/2020 1:54:00 AM
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Many thanks, Harry, appreciate much -- Aloha!~@wk

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