What Are You

The only companion with that endless imagination,
You mostly preferred a solitude atmosphere,
Because you are filled with jealousy:
How did you solidify a mild heart and makes it bold?
You are the first who authoritatively pronounced your spell on others,
And so many clamored for it, mostly the trembling souls.
You are the oldest in the history of mankind.
Are you so ugly or beautiful to reveal your true identity?
So many  famished for your sake,
Some were helped, assisted hopes were given back to them, 
still for your sake.
Some killed for you, you agreed to be used  as fallacy,
Now you have been declared wanted.
I now understand why you individualized yourself:
and uses peoples images as your hideout:
You are so wicked, generous, full of honesty and deceit.
You are hard to find, but easy to come by.
But guilt and honesty had just revealed your identity as (LOVE)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/28/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:25:00 AM
Dele, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:53:00 PM
Hi Dele, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing ....skat
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Date: 7/19/2011 7:54:00 AM
Superb observation .Not simply love identified ,it may be life.THANKS a lot my dear poet friend from NIGERIA where my first yahoo friend lives whom i ever remember .My feelings captured throu my poem LOVE ON NET.Have the real taste of love.Let us be a bit positive.
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Date: 7/13/2011 6:46:00 PM
Creative and thoughtful expressions Dele
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Date: 7/13/2011 5:53:00 AM
Hi Dele, Welcome to poetrySoup, may the God of heaven prosper thy way like the trees planted by a river, give you inspiration with each glorious dawn, and favour the works of thy hand.
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:33:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dele. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2011 9:43:00 AM
This is a very good poem that you've posted as your first. Welcome to Poetry Soup. -Leigh Anne
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