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i try to fit in with warm hellos superficial smiles and nods of acquiescence checking if i can make myself useful comfortable in the support role back in the dark behind the scenes in a sea of strangers with names i won't remember a semblance of a dance parading fleeting faces avalanche of entanglements and sequence of collisions may as well be gilded gargoyles doing the backstroke in the River Nile while me, i'm driftwood on the beach of life AP: 3rd place 2025 Posted on March 28, 2025

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Date: 3/28/2025 4:44:00 PM
ok....you're driftwood.....something on an 'ocean beech'......enjoy your trip around the world........len
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2025 9:24:00 PM
lol ~ a sailboat or a piece of driftwood, so much in common !
Date: 3/28/2025 3:44:00 PM
Driftwood, tumbleweed, better than a gnat or a pesky skeeter I always say
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Date: 3/28/2025 9:23:00 PM
lol ~ good to remember
Date: 3/28/2025 2:12:00 PM
Fantastic poem. I really love the ending especially.
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Date: 3/28/2025 9:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, Benjamin ~

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