What Am I

I came from different hands 'til you had me. 
From pieces you picked me and gave meaning. 
Designed me patiently to let others see my flair. 
You gave me a brand new life,you made me whole. 
Until somebody saw my beauty and had me owned. 
At first, he treated me so gently, like nobody does. 
Days passed, then he forgot my worth. 
I'm always left in a corner of his home. 
Even though I was hurting, I kept on serving him all day long. 
He wasn't contented, he used and abused. 
Let all people come and go without even notice. 
They just passed by, as if not aware that I was there. 
No one really cared, they left me broken and unclean. 
And finally, the day that I awaited.... 
The time came for me to be free. 
After all the pain he'd caused me. 
My final journey, time for me to take a ride. 
I can't help not to wave goodbye. 
And keep myself asking why. 
Why did he let me in to his life, 
then throw me away after all that I've done. 
He left me with a hanging line... 
asking myself now...WHAT AM I TO YOU?




** 2nd Place Winner in PD's Contest: WHAT AM I?**
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Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , aiyah
Torres Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 10:17 AM
ThaNk You, Dr,. Ram!!! ..it's an honor to have your comment ...^__^
Hamilton Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 2:35 PM
great pen Aiyah congrats on win hugs
Torres Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 3:48 PM
ThaNk you, sweetie Shadow!! congrats to you ,too!! :D
A  Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 2:07 PM
Awesome win AiyaH.. Love ~SKAT~
Torres Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Love you more SKAT!!! ..thanks a lot sexy!!! ^_6
A   Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Inquiring minds wanna know! Hi Aiyah , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA
Torres Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 3:47 PM
THANK YOU SO MUCH ,Linda!!! ..^__^
A   Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 12:31 PM
soup mail
Brown Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 8:00 PM
wonderful, heartfelt, and full of emotion! my prayer would be that we always look to the Father to find out who we are, others opinion have the potential to destroy us! Good luck in the Contest and thanks for sharing, Stacey
Torres Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Thank you for this wonderful comment, Stacey!! ..i appreciate your visit on my poem ^__^
Lamoureux Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 7:09 PM
My first thought was that you where a quilt made from discarded pieces of fabric. I really enjoyed this piece.
Torres Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 7:29 AM
i think you've unlocked the key ,Ric!! ..great!!! ....^__^
Van Breda Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 1:10 PM
An exceptional and honest heartfelt piece of poetr. Thank you for expressing these words so truthfully with P/Soup. xxx
Torres Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Kim...it's my pleasure to have your comment.. ^__^ ..Thank you for reading my poem!! I'll take a journey to your world..soon =D
Liwayway Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 12:50 AM
a very deep emotion....I can feel the pain...very creative..very good!! Good luck in the contest..hugs :)
Torres Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Thank you, Paz... it's an honor to have your comment on my poem!! ..^__^
A  Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:53 PM
AiyaH, you are one amazing deep poet. DID I GET IT RIGHT? Wishing you the best of luck ~Love~ SKAT
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 1:07 PM
lol.. SKAT.,that's too much again...=0)) aahhh...i love this day!! ha ha.. THANK YOU DEAR!!! ^__^
Bordner Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:38 PM
You are Freedom, beautiful and moving Aiyah. "Designed me patiently so others see my flair..." That's fine Art. J.A.B.
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:48 PM
now.. can you guess WHAT AM I???..he he ^__^
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:47 PM
that's too much, J.A.B.~~ ..he he.. Thank you!!! ...your comment is so rewarding... you warmth my heart today.. 6__6
Manassian Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:15 PM
This speaks of pain...Oh dear...I hope this is just your muse talking and not your soul....It's powerful. Good luck in the contest, dear. Hugs
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:21 PM
my dear Eileen...thank you for dropping in...=) sorry if i made you sad 'bout it... don't worry, this is not so personal... ^__^ ..tysm =0))
Hamilton Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 11:09 AM
strong pen Aiyah gl in contest hugs
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:04 PM
thank you for warming up my soul, Shadow!!! ..^__^ ..can you guess WHAT AM I??
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