What Am I

What am I?
Just a body that expires
with its hungers and desires
At both ends?
- That depends

What am I?
A Myriad of grey brain cells
Whose synapsing rings my bells
Does the thinking and compute?
- That I refute

What am I?
Made in image of a god
That then decays and starts to nod
Eyes that dim and bones that ache?
- Must be some mistake

What am I?
One of the masses - not free willed
Promised to have our bellies filled
To be controlled for our own good?
- Not for me, although some would

What am I?
After four score year or two
Getting the hang of what to do
Then be totally snuffed out?
- That I doubt

What am I?
I am here and you are there 
We all got to be somewhere
Seeing the world with admiration
- Worth consideration

What am I?
Where life’s images reside
In Mirror cracked from side to side
Mid the taking and the putting
- I am that which does the looking

What am I?
Maybe nothing you can touch
Not of flesh and bone and such
I am that which asks the question, wonders why
 - “What am I?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Theraven Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Hope you found the other side of the mirror Geoffrey. Though you're still sorely missed this side. -Richard
Burrows Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 11:36 AM
A well written piece in trying to understand one’s purpose in life and and the entire Shabang on death.
Carber Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 11:23 AM
I really like the final 2 stanzas! I was fortunate enough as a young man to experience my 'immortal part' residing for a time in this mortal vessel we call the body--but having an NDE opens up a whole other set of questions....
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 8:17 AM
The essence of our humanity is realized within contemplation. Once it is connected to The Great “I Am” we can travel beyond our earthly limitations. Well expressed poet.
Brewer Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 10:04 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful response, Richard.
Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Love your musing on this eternal question... Keep these coming! Best always, Gershon (P.S. I am one of the masses --- of molasses. lol. Thanks, gw)
Brewer Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 9:42 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Keep taking the molasses!
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:50 PM
I really like this. And in light of what is going on in the world right now, I relate to it that way.
Brewer Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback, Andrea.
Mishra Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 12:00 PM
The universe contains me and I contain the universe, I could hear that echo throughout your poem. What a beautiful one :)
Brewer Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Thank you very much, Aditi.
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