What Am I?

I’ve lost myself along the way
I loved you in a place, once upon a time
How can I learn to go on?
When with each breath that I take,
I need you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 2/27/2010 12:48:00 PM
Oops! Reem, I almost forgot to congratulate you on having your very special poem featured this week. (I must have been distracted by the first ever End Line Word member contest (my first sponsored contest…See my blogs for information.) Anyway, I didn’t want the week to pass without congratulating you. So, Congratulations!!! (Lost love hurts) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/23/2010 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week. ......Jimmy
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:33:00 PM
You are broken. Congrats on your poem being featured.
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Date: 2/22/2010 10:11:00 AM
Many congratulations to you for you poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
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Date: 2/22/2010 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Reem. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2009 11:54:00 AM
Reem! A highly passionate write. I am deeply touched. A brilliantly written story of a desolate heart that has power to melt hearts. Thanks for your comments on my poem Nothing. Believe me, my existence is nothing. A Quatrain from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi: Under the wings of your thoughts skies are nothing/ Make sure your thrust is not lacking/ Lest the world regards you as failure/ Scale the ladder to reach Absolute Being. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/18/2008 11:52:00 AM
This too shall pass ... smile ... and so it goes, this life we lead with Hello's and Goodbyes ... so glad you've come to share your words here at PoetrySoup, Reem. I'll have to read more of your writing!!
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Date: 9/2/2008 2:22:00 PM
This clearly shows the downfall to love - sometimes when it gets lost so do those who were a part of it - great job - God Bless
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