What Am I?

I’ve lost myself along the way
I loved you in a place, once upon a time
How can I learn to go on?
When with each breath that I take,
I need you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Oops! Reem, I almost forgot to congratulate you on having your very special poem featured this week. (I must have been distracted by the first ever End Line Word member contest (my first sponsored contest…See my blogs for information.) Anyway, I didn’t want the week to pass without congratulating you. So, Congratulations!!! (Lost love hurts) Lovingly, Dane Ann
Anderson Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week. ......Jimmy
Chu Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:33 PM
You are broken. Congrats on your poem being featured.
Fraser Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Many congratulations to you for you poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Reem. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
Yamin Avatar
January 16, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Reem! A highly passionate write. I am deeply touched. A brilliantly written story of a desolate heart that has power to melt hearts. Thanks for your comments on my poem Nothing. Believe me, my existence is nothing. A Quatrain from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi: Under the wings of your thoughts skies are nothing/ Make sure your thrust is not lacking/ Lest the world regards you as failure/ Scale the ladder to reach Absolute Being. -Mohammad
Mason Avatar
September 18, 2008 at 11:52 AM
This too shall pass ... smile ... and so it goes, this life we lead with Hello's and Goodbyes ... so glad you've come to share your words here at PoetrySoup, Reem. I'll have to read more of your writing!!
Jordan Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 2:22 PM
This clearly shows the downfall to love - sometimes when it gets lost so do those who were a part of it - great job - God Bless
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