What Am I?

I’ve lost myself along the way I loved you in a place, once upon a time How can I learn to go on? When with each breath that I take, I need you.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/27/2010 12:48:00 PM

Oops! Reem, I almost forgot to congratulate you on having your very special poem featured this week. (I must have been distracted by the first ever End Line Word member contest (my first sponsored contest…See my blogs for information.) Anyway, I didn’t want the week to pass without congratulating you. So, Congratulations!!! (Lost love hurts) Lovingly, Dane Ann

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/23/2010 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week. ......Jimmy

Hyle Chu

Date: 2/22/2010 5:33:00 PM

You are broken. Congrats on your poem being featured.

James Fraser

Date: 2/22/2010 10:11:00 AM

Many congratulations to you for you poetry being featured on the Soups home page >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2010 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Reem. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 1/16/2009 11:54:00 AM

Reem! A highly passionate write. I am deeply touched. A brilliantly written story of a desolate heart that has power to melt hearts. Thanks for your comments on my poem Nothing. Believe me, my existence is nothing. A Quatrain from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi: Under the wings of your thoughts skies are nothing/ Make sure your thrust is not lacking/ Lest the world regards you as failure/ Scale the ladder to reach Absolute Being. -Mohammad

Sue Mason

Date: 9/18/2008 11:52:00 AM

This too shall pass ... smile ... and so it goes, this life we lead with Hello's and Goodbyes ... so glad you've come to share your words here at PoetrySoup, Reem. I'll have to read more of your writing!!

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/2/2008 2:22:00 PM

This clearly shows the downfall to love - sometimes when it gets lost so do those who were a part of it - great job - God Bless