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What Air I Breathe

What air I breathe! It’s what my eyes conceive. And bright with tears and hearty breast’s exhale, My sheltered mind ascends, to light-receive. It’s where my heart’s upbeat - unknown, my tale. I’m snapped into the driver’s seat. I spy The scenery - I live within these frames. I pick up speed, forget one day I’ll die. I linger long behind the dashboard games. At last, I park. The moonlight stills the night. I ponder the meaning of all perceived. In Savior’s shadow, I find my sight. My tale, reborn, when Jesus, I believed. The tender scent of life, at first naïve. What air I breathe! It’s what my eyes conceive. 5/6/2022 Orphan Sonnet Sponsor: Emile Pinet HMS and Rhymezone used

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Date: 5/9/2022 5:28:00 PM
Beautifully written sonnet. The rhythm and flow were soothing. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Kim. Bill
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Date: 5/6/2022 12:33:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet, though in Malta the air we breathe is full of dust. But as I read I come to its spiritual conclusion, Best for a win, dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2022 5:19:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! ~ hugs

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