What a Token Can Be Rewrite

I hear the song of Magic Sleep
On Soundscapes during the night
The days now are so quiet
Neighbors next door vaccinated with children
Have short parties and cookies and juice
But then cars disappear and sounds suddenly are reduced

And as silence returns I ponder 
When and where can I retrieve
What I was and now can be 
No more driving — careful of seizures 
And medicines which make it harder to see

At this time of life where can I 
Leave my mark and where can my
Token of an existing life truly be
Yes I take care of my pets
A crow and squirrel and I
Meet for breakfast regularly

Perhaps after the next shot of vaccine
I can return with food and puppy treats
For pets and veterans' lunch pleasant and serene
But pain is always there so I seek help and heat
And on evening Wednesdays I will listen to the hum
Of meditation with others and the Teacher's welcome

And so my token of life may be
A badge of acceptance in a small slice of life
But not diminished to any great degree
Elements of change a union of soul and body
A living token of the great branching tree
The tree of life both active then still

As all living things will be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/10/2021 6:20:00 AM
These are particularly difficult days. We are often not aware of what others are dealing with. Blessings and hugs to you Linda.
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Date: 4/9/2021 11:26:00 AM
You wear a badge of courage, Linda. Your longing for a full life runs deeply through each line like a living token. This is a very inspirational piece. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings.
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Date: 4/8/2021 7:08:00 PM
Dearest Linda, I can tell from your poem that you are braving this life and succeeding. Thank you for penning such a heart felt poem, full of humanity and courage. Congrats on your win, thank you for joining. :)
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Date: 4/8/2021 1:34:00 PM
Well penned Linda, with nice imagery and insightful thought. I hope things improve for you soon, take care, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:13:00 AM
My heart aches for you with so much troubles but I love your optimistic attitude. Be strong, be safe. We all have our troubles. I've been suffering since the beginning of the month.
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Linda Milgate
Date: 4/7/2021 10:06:00 PM
I am sorry just reading this now I hope you are feelig better? If weather warms sometimes that helps and when it's cold and damp its worse. Please take care As always enjoy you poetry. I think some of my poetry is a refection of human troubles not the typical honey and butterflies poems although they can be lovely.
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