What a Push Over [footle}

your 
     more

             mushy
                       gushy
 
                                     chewy
                                             gooey

                                                         but
                                                                such
                                                                  
                                                                          phony
                                                                                  bologna 

                                                                                           Tis ok
                                                                                                  I'll stay


Tribute To Love LOL

Also Entry For Matt Caliri
I Love You Because Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kelly Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 11:39 AM
E V E R ... C L E V E R .... You're in .. Will Win .Well footled Katherine and best of luck with your most unique entry ...
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 9:44 AM
This description of your loved one reminds me of some people who have passed through my life. We stay because we love the warmth that comes from the "musy gushy" words, even though we sometimes know they are "phony bologna." Best wishes for success in the contest, Katherine. Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 8:52 AM
Delightful entry and unique twist to the contest!! Good job! ~ Carrie
Nutter Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 8:38 AM
Looks like a winner, well written and best of luck in the contest.
Das Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 8:23 AM
hey..nice to follow the new footsteps. Love Swairik
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