What a Night

Yesterday night I saw Moon! 

                yesterday night the moon was gazing at me
                     through a little section of my window.
                the white lacy curtain was drawn to one side.
        she was dazzling! the sky was pitch-dark, not a star visible! 
                and at the centre moon shone at its brightest! 

                           it was directly looking at me, 
                smiling, like an enchanting, ravishing woman, 
                       on her way to win someone's heart! 
                       I couldn't sleep, I was mesmerized! 
               her beauty kept me awake for an infinite  time.

                            I didn't have glasses on me, 
                       she was perfect, radiant, exuberant, 
          sometimes her beams were scattered to my glassless eyes, 
                        sometimes she was my sweetheart, 
                       two of them blended into each other.

  sometimes I perceived the light as broken into thousand pieces of dazzling mirror, 
                                     sharp and brilliant, 
                        sometimes she was a magical face, 
                of an indescribable Princess, from ancient times.

             it was a very special night-sky, moon and my sweetheart kept
                      me awake, by smiling their prettiest smiles, 
                        although both of them are far far away, 
                                 I couldn't go back to sleep, 
                       until the serene touch of a tranquil breeze, 
                             and mellifluous chirping of birds, 
                                     dawned on my eyelids.

    
                                "The Night Sky" Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Anna Marie Kaianah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 6, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Back with congratulations Mala! I love the gentleness of your relationship with the moon expressed in soft words - "sleep," and "tranquil." You so wonderfully expressed the mesmerizing effect of moonlight and its lullaby. Sending you blessings of spring moonlight dear friend!
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:46 PM
i love this and how personal you made it. Viewing lovely moon without MY glasses, she will be a huge blur to me!! Congrats on your win, Mala.
Alex Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 7:05 AM
"she was a magical face" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Kaianah Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:28 AM
Congratulations on your win Malabika! <3 ~Anna Kaianah
Kauffman Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 12:37 PM
So tender Mala - gentle as moonbeams in your eyes, soft as a "tranquil breeze. You have beautifully recreated this serene scene. This is like a serenade or a lullaby. Blessing to you dear friend!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Dear Sam, how much I appreciate your encouraging comments - love to hear those tender, beautiful words inspiring me - you are an amazing poet, and a true friend. Love~ Mala
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