Whale Songs

Voices of the deep,
Singing from their mammal souls:
Exulting echoes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2009 at 2:24 AM
I love this Haiku. I believe I can hear them now talking to each other. Sara
Mason Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Arn't they awesome with their song !! Beautiful haiku here, Raul.
 Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Whales fascinated me so I was drawn to this poem. Nice use of alliteration. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a good day! Karen
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 5:25 AM
Raul, what a beautiful Haiku. I am always amazed that so much is said in a Haiku poem. You did an outstanding job writing this one. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your comments on my writing. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 12:47 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment today Raul.Rgds Brian
Lopez Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 11:27 PM
"Exulting exhoes" very nice ..... have you seen the show -whale wars- on tv interesing...
Ginn Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Your title drew me in. I think its the most soulfull of sounds. It does something so spiritually fullfilling in me
Fraser Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Nice Haiku Raul>>James
Guzzi Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 4:45 PM
Singing mammalian souls..........loved the last line! I wonder what echoes humans are making? Light & Love
Chircop Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 9:41 AM
So very beautiful Raul--charma
Strand Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Like the aliteration in L3 Raul.Nice one.Rgds Brian
Wilson Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 7:20 AM
Very well done. Thanks.
Buys Avatar
July 10, 2009 at 6:53 AM
Oh wow! So very clever and so very beautiful. Regards Heidie
Pickett Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 11:49 PM
good technique...JP....
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