...Wet Ice Pellets

wet ice pellets pitter patter on the pane… radiators steam

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David Smalling

Date: 11/11/2010 10:34:00 AM

I am not a fan of the haiku, except as verse in a poem, or a stanzas when I write ... for brevity is best only when my readers understand (I want the world to understand and change). I love your haikus though

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2010 9:49:00 AM

You are bringing back the memories of the radiators steam, Debbie

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2010 9:26:00 AM

hi again, deb.. edited my holiday ku.. kindly check if this was likewise done on your contest content and confirm...can't soup mail you.. thanks for understanding! warmest, nette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/8/2010 7:41:00 AM

you are getting better at the haiku

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2010 6:25:00 AM

how imaginative, deborah!! a pleasing 'ku.. i entered your contest and did a double haiku as there was no note regarding limit of lines.. can you give me clarifications on this?? thanks.. i'll try to soup mail you.. all the best! warmest, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2010 5:45:00 AM

I remember the old radiator we had as a kid and how we put our wet socks on them, Deb. You brought back sweet memories of wet childhood days! You have so many poems, could you send me a link to "Dad." I have to go out soon, but would like to read it. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/8/2010 5:38:00 AM

A chill in the air with this one, a cozzy write my dear..aways Michael