Wet Feet

there once was a child from the city
who grew up in fear.. what a pity

she cried millions of tears
and was ignored fifty years

now in a puddle she scribbles this ditty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sawyer Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 6:37 AM
Thanks Y'all! Patsy
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May 13, 2010 at 4:57 AM
a very awesome limerick, enjoyed,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:13 AM
A nice limerick
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May 12, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Got a chuckle out of the last line. I think the title works well with the poem. I enjoyed it. Karen
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