West Coast Sky

~California Dawn~ That sharp gold-blue sky One lonely cloud says goodbye West Coast morning 5/1/2023
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May 7, 2023 at 8:53 AM
So true... I love the west... I have been east... and glad to be living in the west... Well done... Ann
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May 7, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Thank you,fellow West Coaster. I am glad I left Chicago. Yikes. The beauty and peace here is unmatchable..)) Pangie….merci
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May 5, 2023 at 8:43 AM
What a sweet haiku Pangie. I remember that sky - very beautiful! :)
Romios Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 8:51 AM
TY, Linda.have a miraculous day. Pangie
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May 2, 2023 at 4:49 PM
Powerful Haiku, Pangie. Very descriptive and intriuing. Bill
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May 2, 2023 at 5:03 PM
Hi again, Bill, see! There are natural wonders in Califorbis. I am so glad you liked this Haiku. Best wishes to Sara, .. Pangie
Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Cute!!! 'One lonely cloud says 'goodbye.' Sounds like Hawaii to me. Nicely done, Pangie!
Romios Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Thank you,Gershon Pangie
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May 1, 2023 at 2:48 PM
I was stationed in California for a short time while in the military, over half a century ago, and the sun keeps on rising on us both.....Nicely done Pangs
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May 1, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Hi Lawless. You are right on the money,this year we have lots of rain and snow in the mountains. So we have been in the drought, for several years, but nanymore , hurray, Pangie
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May 1, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Another scene I witnessed many years ago, you're lucky to see it all the time. Tom
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May 1, 2023 at 6:29 PM
I am always grateful to have moved here, Tom. Such a sane, quaint town! Good wishes from the USA, Pangie
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May 1, 2023 at 12:28 PM
- A lovely morning, Pangie :) - Enjoy your day :) - hugs
Romios Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Sunshine, I couldn’t find a image to match the poem. But glad you liked ot despite that!! Pangie
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