Were You To Be Gone

Were You To Be Gone

Could I carry on
Were you to be gone
I guess I can
But do understand 

The skies would be blue
But have no more color
Not driving with you
Would lose all of its wonder

Songs would be noise
Losing all of its joy
Sunshine on Leith
Sounding more like a bleat

A walk through the mill
Would only be Bill
No longer as green
A whole different scene

Those rides to nowhere
Would lose all of its flare
I’d hear no more laughs
For my driving gaffs

Going out to eat
Would just be that
No longer sharing
Just me getting fat

Could I carry on
Were you to be gone
I guess I can
Be a man with no plan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/12/2018 4:39:00 AM
We always miss the ones we love, and yes life changes then, thank you for sharing Bill, it was nice reading your poem
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Date: 12/12/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thank You Pixie Dust, Yes, so many things shared get sheared, a beautiful sunset becomes just the sun going down. I changed the second block, didnt ring right...
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