We'Re All Jusr Fine

I’ve always yearned for more in life,
But not with all the stress and strife….
Although I set goals maybe higher than I should
It  sometimes appears to others… as maybe it could…
That what  I have accomplished.. is easy for me…
But , what others see, may not always be..…
The long hours of dealing with life and death…
Only made me stronger...to take the next breath.
Being away from you all, was the price I paid..
But, it was a decision that I had made….
To keep moving on to the next level of time…
Would insure that in life ,we would be just fine…
We’ve had our ups. .and we’ve had our downs..
We’ve had our smiles and we had our frowns….
But through it all the most important thing to me…
Is we’re still together…my Family and me….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/20/2016 11:03:00 PM
KJ, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words. Keep sharing and writing poetry. ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/21/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thanks SKAT...appreciate your follow and comments...will try to catch up on your writes..been having vision problems, of and on for over a year...my world suddenly collapsed from under me... fighting back as hard as I can...til next time...kj
Date: 9/21/2015 3:06:00 PM
Another touching poem, KJ. "But, what others see, may not always be.." So true..."to take the next breath", and stay together, we always have each other, and it is such a blessing. I can tell this is straight from the heart. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:42:00 PM
Laura..thank you again for your kind words...have a great week-end...kjforce
Date: 3/24/2015 10:17:00 PM
Lionel..thank you for commenting on my write.glad you felt a personal touch...
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:12:00 PM
This poem speaks to me, because it seems about me.
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Date: 3/24/2015 10:30:00 PM
Lionel..thank you for commenting on my write.glad you felt a personal touch...
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