Weltanschauung

wayra

An inheritance
makes my life easy to live.
Headaches?  heartaches?  no hindrance
no hedge, I have money.
I long to know logic in life.

A door falls open
Entering I find the best
of friends, food, festivity...
lasting until midnight.
alarms alert me to wake up.

A second door, closed,
boasts the note, "key is within". 
noticing no knob, I sense -
there is no keyhole here?
and muse upon this mystery.

The third door is home
where I rest without relief.
Wealth, words, Weltanschauung
keep up their steady pace
provoking my peace with purpose.

Determined to know 
the key to that second door,
I crave, I coax, I call on
experts within my realm.
My money soon meets its Master.

Beating on that door 
wrestling with my God.
Erelong hidden latch loosens 
missing pieces float free 
golden keys to liberty.

Author’s Notes:
Weltanschauung
[velt-ahn-shou-oo-ng]   noun German. 
a comprehensive conception or image of the universe and of humanity's 
relation to it, a world view.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 29, 2014 at 12:44 PM
Reason, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Very well penned tremendous write Reason,, congrats on huge win!
Nance Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:01 PM
Well Done! Standing applause! what a great story, perfect contest entry and great continuation. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 7:31 PM
oh, it was so nice to finally see your long version. It is so much more comprehensive that way. Big congrats on your win and glad you could show your long version now.
Lindley Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Both are fine writes, I prefer the longer one my friend! It is a very fine and more detailed presentation!! Huge congrats on your fine win!!!!
Poteet Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 12:45 PM
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my entry (and edits). I liked the form and wrote the piece before I realized nette only wanted two stanzas.
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 9:48 AM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find its quality very good..Sara
Poteet Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 11:00 AM
thanks, Sara, it is a welcome comment that I read here. Appreciate the read and remarks.
Richards Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 9:47 AM
I love the unusual direction you have taken this contest.....so much to ponder and a sense of mystery. I love this one! Would love to read the longer version !
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 6:36 AM
wonderful take on the doors theme. congratulations on your win. Hugs Jan xx
Mehta Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 6:14 AM
I love your take on the theme, congrats on the win, Reason
Poteet Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 11:01 AM
thanks, Dr. Ram, I am glad you took the time to read and comment.
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Yes, this one will look even better when you have added to it because I can sense it needs to say more. good one. What does Weltanschauung mean??
Poteet Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 9:53 PM
Thanks for asking: a person's or a group's conception, philosophy or view of the world; a worldview
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 12:31 AM
Your situation is so much like mine, Reason!! My oldest grandchild is the boy and he is nearly 12 too. Now let me see this poem you have written!
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