Welsh Winter : englyn

Ah, so sweet "though starred sheep remain sleek" good luck with the contest, if it's still there :)

I’ll find how this poetry -form works All the best for contest

I'm not familiar with the Englyn form of poetry, I never written one. Yours flows well. Good luck in the contest, my new friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Dear Ghairo, I enjoyed the desolate feeling of your first line, and the vibrant imagery that follows, that builds into the wonderful lively finale of your last line. There is so much here to linger over.. a vivid and enchanting piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

I love the wordplay here, as always you have a special and artistic way of expressing that makes your poems stand out really dear poetic soul, i love the alliterations and your choice of words plus the cadence of your lines so beautifully flowing! Im happy to see you also write more now, pleasure visiting you today, i hope you are doing well. Sending you light always