Arlene Smith Poet Diminished Hexaverse

We'Ll Never Know

Ships pass in the night;
seldom acquanted,
going separate ways,
ner' to meet again.
Faded into dark.

Sailing away,
ore' horizons;
hardly a wave
is left behind.

Emptiness
fills my soul,
left alone.

We were
passing

ships.

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Jeremy Smith May 10, 2017 at 5:26 PM Very sad, how its lost forever.

Monterey Sirak February 5, 2015 at 1:34 PM This one explodes with sadness and longing as it drifts gently away. Awesome!!

Barbara Gorelick January 30, 2015 at 6:54 PM Oh my, this speaks to me..Very nice work..BG

Robert Johnson January 30, 2015 at 6:35 PM A gentle sadness kissed my face. When your love slipped by my place. Just like your poem, it fades away. I guess it wasn't meant to stay. The fade away line is in reference to the shape of your poem. Peace. :)

Jan Allison January 30, 2015 at 1:39 PM beautifully penned Arlene but oh so sad such a feeling of intense loneliness over what might have been:-( Hugs Jan a 7 from me:-)