Well Excuse Me

“Honey, did you lock the garage door?”
I really didn’t know how to answer. 
But a “wise” husband never lets one like this go. 
“Well, technically, the latch is thrown
so the knob will not turn,
but the door is standing wide open”.

Her reply:

“Well, technically, one with one’s 
head up that narrow passage,
means the same as an ostrich
burrowing its head in the sand.
But untechnically, I don’t think 
the ostrich would agree.”

                   ~//~

Nov. 08 2010  Charles Henderson 3 rd
in Thvia's Shetley's "analogy" contest
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Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:53 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:57 PM
clever clever, Charles. Glad I was able to finally see this one for its winning in the contest. Cngratulations!
Devonshire Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your win, Charles! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Charles in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 11:39 PM
charles - Many Congrats for big win in contest.... Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Sweetheart Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Congrats Charles on your big win in Thvia's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy a top spot with for a top notch poem luv..
Oimbo Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 9:02 AM
the conversation employed in the poem works well
Devonshire Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Got a great laugh from your ostrich analogy. A lot of men seem to be afflicted with ostrich syndrome, Charles. My sympathies to your wife. LOL Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 6:41 AM
A fantastic analogy- ostrich is quite well known for burrowing its head in the sand as if nothing would happen, Charles
M V Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 6:37 AM
funny and lovely piece indeed,charles
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 11:45 PM
very humorous entry , good luck in the contest Charles
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