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Well-Kept Secrets

Shamelessly in front you strut in your flimsy swimming suit, curves and cleavage exposing aimed to rouse and scintillate. Stop! don't waste time on me showing off what men had seen; bare yourself and go naked, you won't interest me still. The flesh you fully reveal is far from what I'm after; it is the secrets you keep that I want to uncover.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/15/2008 5:54:00 PM
It is what is covered that is the most alluring.If naked all is exposed. A well thought out poem Fred. God BLess Phyl
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Date: 11/14/2008 3:00:00 AM
More swimming, I see! lol It is always the secrets, the within, that holds the most allure...I have always found more power in one well-shot glance, than naked flesh strutting anyday. Loved this one, and the twist, love Kristin
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Date: 11/14/2008 1:41:00 AM
This is well thought and written poem...Raul
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