Welcoming spring

early march grunge not pretty
mud and thaw try kickstarting life's gurgling
a first crocus breaks through


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 9:44 AM
It only takes one. Good luck in the contest,Line.
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 12:17 PM
The imagery is great, Line. The trees, flowers are having a blast making the allergies have fun. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Allergies are not so much fun though, Eve.
Kiser Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Beautiful Haiku, I can see that Crocus peeking up from the soil. Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:06 AM
The excitement of Spring in your lovely explosion!
Gauthier Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim. We are so very ready for spring!!
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