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Welcome To the Machine: Part 6

Plight of the Office Worker > My poor tired eyes Versus this bright glaring screen I must continue

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/29/2016 11:38:00 PM

:) A fantabulous poem! I write haikus and senryus - those are hella fun. It's a perfect, mini poem that has style. Keep up the grand writing. I rate this a 7 ~~~J W Earnings

Michael Whatley
Date: 5/3/2016 8:46:00 AM

Many thanks, J.W, I too have a soft-spot for the sweet micro-writes!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/29/2016 12:56:00 PM

Have to earn a living...and the boss has good eyesight! Well expressed....paul

Michael Whatley
Date: 5/3/2016 8:45:00 AM

Aha, many thanks Paul!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/25/2016 8:39:00 AM

Lovely, Haiku, dear Michael!

Michael Whatley
Date: 1/25/2016 5:14:00 PM

Many thanks Demetrios!

White Sage

Date: 1/23/2016 3:09:00 AM

yeah, you must...but get some sheilds against the flares...well written Michael

Michael Whatley
Date: 1/25/2016 5:13:00 PM

Indeed! At least monitors aren't quite so dangerous as 80's ones though. Many thanks W.S.