Welcome To the Machine: Part 4

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Laid down her arms
relinquished the chair
The challenger had arrived
flashed up onscreen

Repeating the action 
She examined its power
Efforts to no avail
It returned to the scene

Our hero was facing
A technical hitch
That unforgiving popup
With the evil red sheen

Carefully she read 
But could not comprehend
Commas colons and code
Both seen and unseen

Ah, the dire terminology
Bane of the user!

System thirty-two? 
Now what could that mean?
She wouldn’t take defeat
At least not lying down

And so took to the cursor
Whizzed it ‘cross the screen
A courageous move
Though a foolish one too

*Miss-click*

The hard drive was wiped?
Damn this machine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/8/2016 5:35:00 PM
Yeah... been there done that.. very well written ~~X~~
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Michael Whatley
Date: 1/9/2016 2:58:00 PM
Amen to that, Kim!
Date: 1/1/2016 8:34:00 AM
well written...
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