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Welcome To Hell


I was ridin' my black Harley down a dark curving road,
my long tangled blonde hair full of wild wind and highway dirt;
when far off-   I see a hotel light and a WELCOME sign.

In the office, a toothless guy in a ripped black t-shirt,
bone-weary I ask him, do you have a room for the night;
welcome to Hotel Hell where you check in but never check out.

I heard howling and saw shadows dancing in the moonlight,
guitars were wailing and weeping and pretty boys were swaying;
someone hands me the BEAST known as weed holding me still.

And soon with those pretty boys, I am dancing and clinging . . . 

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August 3, 2017

Verse/Welcome To Hell
Copyright Protected, ID 926638


Written for the contest,  Iconic Songs
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place

Inspired by the song - Hotel California, Eagles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 4, 2017 at 8:50 AM
This song has so many different interpretations and I liked yours.. congratulations on your placement..
Warrior Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 6:25 PM
Beautifully crafted my friend...hope everything is OK Constance...god bless...^WW^
La France Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Winged thanks for the beautiful and yes I am doing well
Johnson Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 10:17 AM
Great choice Broken Wings. Best wishes in the contest. Curtis.
La France Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:44 PM
Thank you Curtis
Onclaud Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 5:23 PM
such a riveting poem inspired by the eagles' lyrics.. you are definitely back in finer shape, dear constance... hope you are well!... huggs
La France Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:46 PM
Nette thanks for visiting my poem and for that nice comment
Sivey Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 2:05 PM
Oh I love that song! And you have written something similar but enough different to be your very own! I really enjoyed your poem this afternoon! You have amazed me with your poetry for many years my friend and this one is one of my favs of yours! Great Work!!
La France Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:46 PM
Russell thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment
Wood Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 11:27 AM
I think this says it better than the song does. A great interpretation of a great song! - Dean
La France Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Thanks Dean for the compliment
Sands Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Well done Broken Wings! Good luck in the contest. :)
La France Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Heidi thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Great write!
La France Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Kim thanks for visiting and the great
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