Welcome To Freedom (Political Piece)

*** First and foremost, I had to edit this piece a bit because of the profanity in the
original version (however, I will follow the rules)  This piece was based on several
images of children that were shot because of the Israel-Palestinian conflict in the middle
east.  i do not mean to offend anyone with my work, and if so, I do apologize.  I would
link the pictures, but I see that's against the rules too.  I hope you all enjoy!


Bullet's ricochet through babies flesh 
Blood splattered his age on the pavement 
Tattooed the mother's hands with the assassin's name 
Silent cries echoed through Jerusalem 
As his bones shattered to feces 
Chest burns as the last breath of innocence is inhaled 
Dusting his ashes through the hills of Bethlehem 
Through the mist of the familiar laughter coming from the militant vocals 
Church bells ring and prayers are enchanted 
Because another infant's longevity to life has failed 
Killing these children one by one 
Has become a heroin addiction to the Zionist system 
Shooting needles injected with bullet wounds and missiles 
Gunshots travel through the pulmonary chamber 
Leaving these children to numbness, blind visions and darkness 
One way tickets to Heaven 
Where his fellow brothers and sisters greet him at the gate 
"Welcome to freedom" is inscribed on his name plate 
He asked God why his time approached so soon 
And silence lingered it's way through the clouds 
Before he heard an angel speak aloud 
"Medical physicians couldn't save you because it was a second too late" 
And the clouds begun to shed rain storms 
Angels and children crying, hand in hand 
While humming warm scriptures from the Qu'ran 
********* 
The reality of this is simple, 
A different young "terrorist" gunned to their casket 
Satisfied the militants statistics 
Now their count is one closer to a million...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/28/2010 10:42:00 PM
This is more than a good write my friend. The evil zionist's are a serious health hazard to men, women and children, and one that is blindly ignored by the media and supported by the western elite. Its such a contradiction that the birth place of so much 'religion' is now the home of so much blood thirst and death. I have seen some of the pictures and they make me cry! Thank you for writing this piece. Much love and respect. lance
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:51:00 PM
INTERESTING AND GOOD WRITE... ENJOYED I.T.
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