Melani Udaeta Poet Free verse

Welcome Freefall Part Two On Fire

Emotions stir eternally enchanted,
each hurricane fades to a black sky.
The listless poet’s quill drips,
corralling every vibrant sunset. 
Writing as old lyrics catch the air,
Say it to me again.. ‘Freefall!’

I don’t want to be disappointed 
but I know it’s the truth; 
Nothing will ever feel as good as you;

Strawberry-orange flavored orchestra,
citrus pizazz on your senses;
Each note meticulously blended,
what a sweet tart of a smoothie.
The next verse begins with ‘Sweetheart..’
Say it to me again… ‘Freefall!’

I don’t want to be disappointed 
but I know it’s the truth; 
Nothing will ever feel as good as you;

Featherweight feelings floating  
in the air are gingerly swirling.
You want to capture them 
right then they pop,
translating into something else. 
Say it to me just one more time. ‘Freefall!’

I don’t want to be disappointed 
but I know it’s the truth; 
Nothing will ever feel as good as you;
It’s a welcome free fall you talked me into.

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Justin Bordner March 15, 2025 at 8:21 AM This xool poem could convert sweetly into a great song, if Produced right. Give it a Cannons music touch. "Featherweight feelings floating...", nice touch Poetess. That Garnet themed poem was wonderful as well. This poem is a FAV! J.A.B. Melani Udaeta March 15, 2025 at 9:34 AM Thank you so much for the compliment. Be blessed and keep writing.