Paula Swanson Poet Rhyme

Welcome Fall

Upon the breeze, a freshness.
With a hint of chill.
A welcome change from Summer,
across my window sill.
Comfort food upon the table,
set to cool, an apple pie.
Welcome Fall, to my home,
where you'll hear contented sighs.



For the contest;  Fall, Your Choice
sponsored by Brian Strand
Placement: 3rd

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 25, 2011 at 3:37 PM Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Paula. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 24, 2011 at 12:22 AM Great writing about the changing of the season. Today the first day of fall was the warmest day this year here. We had a cool summer. Hope it means we're going to have a long nice fall. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Connie Marcum Wong September 23, 2011 at 10:02 PM This poem conjurs up all the wonderful senses of autumn. Congrats on your deserving win Paula.

Kim Merryman September 23, 2011 at 10:00 PM Nice one, Paula. Congrats on your win! Kim

Ralph Taylor September 23, 2011 at 7:27 PM Congrats on your win, Paula. Awesome write. Nice going. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph

Bob Quigley September 23, 2011 at 10:57 AM Liked this a lot Paula. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A September 19, 2011 at 5:37 PM good luck in the contest p.d.

Russell Sivey September 19, 2011 at 12:30 PM This is quite the incredible write! I really enjoyed the line, "With a hint of chill" that is certainly the calling of the Fall! Wonderful poem Paula!!

Francine Roberts September 19, 2011 at 12:28 PM lovely entry, best of luck in the contest