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Without you the house seemed so quiet ended now is the wait laughter fills in and kills the quiet come let me hug you, long was the wait owl like I kept staring at the gate message is straight and point clear each time you leave I wait near the gate dear how much I miss you is quite clear.

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Date: 9/12/2018 12:31:00 AM
This is a lovely sad piece.
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Date: 9/4/2018 1:02:00 PM
Oh, I love reading this poem of longing and missing the one you love! Excellent write! Pandita
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Bawa Talwar
Date: 9/11/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Pandita for going through my work.

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